It's a good Flash movie...

But it has no place on HBO as the log-line suggests it does.

Kinda boring.

It was quality work but it didn't hit the mark. Your characters sound interesting though (when I read through at the end).

Someone is a Dragonball Z fan...

Nice job, that was pretty cool. If a movie isn't going to have unique characters it should at least feel like a natural extension of the already created universe. Well done.